Peer Review

I did peer reviews recently. I reviewed a girl's video. Her video was only 22 seconds long. There wasn't much I could say about the video. It was too short for me to give enough comments. What I did like about the video is the natural lighting that was used. Also how the video so far seemed natural. She used lighting that fit the scene which is great. The acting didn't seem too forced.  The camera angles got the best shots of the scenes.

What she needs to do to make her movie better is to first finish it. She needs to have at least 1:50 done. She needs some background music at the beginning of her video so there isn't just silence. Dialogue needs to be in the video. There should be some dialogue in the movie so that it's not boring. The titles in the movie should be fixed and more should be added. Not all of the titles that are supposed to be in the movie are there. Also, the ones that are in there are not all in the right order.  Overall the movie needs to be finished. If the movie was finished maybe the only things that would need to be fixed are the titles.